Isabella, that was an awesome blog post, you have a great style of communicating. Your blog was very authentic and as I read it I could literally imagine the childhood you had on that farm, it sounds amazing. You have great sentence structure and use a variety of powerful literary devices which is great. In your blog you are also extremely descriptive whilst keeping your writing concise and relatable, I especially like those short sentences that carry heaps of meaning. Keep up the great work 😀
My peer review of Isabella Giandomenico’s blog 1. A descriptive and delightful blog to read on her childhood experiences on the family farm.
ENGL 102 - Australian Literature 