Abby, that was a great blog post. You have an awesome style of writing and your use of language is very polished. You are able to put together a variety of complex and descriptive words in your sentences which works well to capture meaning but also create an enjoyable blog to read.
I also like how you dissected that painting, noting the artists love for the landscape which is then contrasted with the destructiveness of the people destroying it. I would really encourage you to write longer sentences, (truncated sentences are great) but you clearly have a capacity to convey depth and meaning in your writing, so challenge yourself, write longer and more free flowing sentences!
Awesome work, keep it up 😀
My peer review of Abby Aaron’s blog 3. An awesome blog to read, Abby is a very talented and descriptive writer who engaged with the question really well. ht
ENGL 102 - Australian Literature 