Alyssa that was a awesome blog, you have a very unique style of writing. You have a heavy emphasis on short, truncated sentences, which flow nicely as they contain allot of meaning but are also very authentic. You dont waffle on when describing whats around you, rather you state it clearly and concisely. There is also allot of descriptive language in the blog which paints a vivid of the beach and shrubbery before you.
My favourite part was were you juxtaposed Wooli beach with the “overcrowded’ northern beaches, it gave the image of Wooli being a sort of escape or paradise from what you are used to in Sydney.
Keep up the great work 😀
My review of Alyssa Seccull’s Blog 1 about Wooli Beach. Awesome blog with vivid imagery and a unique style of writing.
ENGL 102 - Australian Literature 
Consistent peer reviews! Good work.
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